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this is

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with the background..

Can you guys help me! its horrible.. and needs fixing!

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:iconakineko:
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What's wrong with it? o.O

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:iconprincess-kira:
its not right!!

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:iconkitty-yasashii:
Hmm...from what I can see, you should probably add a little light reflection off the left eye and add a few shodaow to the right eye. Also, the eyelashes on the right are a bit clumpy, but maybe that's just me being ridiculously picky. It is fantastic though. You have really been practicing with your coloring and it shows. :clap:

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:iconmclure:
I think the head is to small compared to the face.
:iconnianluain:
I seen yer link on MM so I came over!

ok, If I'm really picky the neck and the models left eye (right as we look at it) are wrong. Neck shuld be thinner, and above that eye changed coz its not in the skull shape....

I hope this helps? Just doesnt seem in porportion to the rest of the face! :hug: :blowkiss:

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:iconakineko:
hm... well the shading on her left eye isn't perfect, but I don't really see much wrong with it o.o . . . Maybe move the hair over towards the face more? I dunno

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:iconflamable77:
i think this is one of the best works i've seen from you!!!:clap:

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:iconprincess-kira:
Awh thanks :D I gave up on her too.. man i suck

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:iconprincess-kira:
Yeah the eye is a little odd, and the eyelashes arent finished :d they were scribbles as to where they'll be placed Ta though :D

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